Saturday, August 04, 2007
Lonely Man
It was Friday night nearly 10:15
I was almost asleep on the bar
There was an old man sitting next to me
lighting up a few 10 cent cigars
For hours the place had been empty
filled with nothing but silence and smoke
when the old man turned and spoke to me
after clearing the blues from his throat
He said, "Son, can I tell you something?"
as he slowly let go of his smile
"I'm not asking for pity or anything,
but would you mind listening for a while?
This is a song for the lonely man
though I'm not really sure how it goes
but he sits here again with his glass and a friend
and it's better than drinking alone
As he sat in the shadows of loneliness
like a disheartened iconoclast
he mused that he knew that she loved him less
than the ice at the end of his glass
While the bartender poured him a memory
he filled up his face with a smile
and he said, "Doc, the man who I used to be
hasn't shown up 'round here for a while"
Then he paused from his trite conversation
all the courage was gone from his breath
said "she left me with no hesitation
and that's a debt that I'll pay 'till my death"
This is a song for the lonely man
though I'm not really sure how it goes
but he cries here after telling me about her
and it's better than crying alone
He didn't seem like a fitting role model
when he told me his son was his life
but then he said he put down the bottle
for the woman that became his wife
So when he asked me why everyone leaves him
I was not really sure what to say
but he hopelessly answered his question
saying "it doesn't matter anyway"
It was around the 4th of December
when they lowered him into his grave
and his headstone read "those who remember
he promised he always forgave"
This is a song for the lonely man
though I'm not really sure how it goes
but while he died in the end he could call me a friend
and it's better than dying alone
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2 comments:
so were are some more films from crybart?
i like the idea, make a movie out of my king of boredom.
sandwich it in between two of your new song/poems.
it'd be sweet.
Well, here's the thing: Crybart was started with me, my friend that's in Pennsylvania for the summer, and my other friend's basically everywhere this summer. Plus, I have a nagging 9 to 5 like the one in your King of Boredom (which I just read again and still love). I was planning on coming home and making some movies with you, but then you head off to Austria! So, I haven't had the time or desire to make a movie by myself. Hopefully we get back into it when I get down to school and meet up with the other 2. Until then, I have been writing a Law & Order short parody at work, and hope to sometime put that into action. But, until then, the video camera will probably sit and wait.
However, if you happen to run a great idea by me that I could do myself, I'd love to do something.
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